Space Time Continuum by Alan Ballard from Candler United States

As far as i know i've never tried to compose a song of "space" being the central theme. So this is my attempt at it. Really, there's a contest i'm thinking about entering, with "space": being the main theme. I'd appreciate any comments. Thank you, hope you enjoy.

Hello my name is alan ballard. I'm a musician from asheville nc. Hope you enjoy